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Title: The Identical Twins

They used to say that God made a mistake when He created Maya and Muna Okafor—because no human being should look that much like another. Even their own mother sometimes stared too long before calling a name. Same almond-shaped eyes, same dimple on the left cheek, same smooth brown skin, same soft voice. But while the world saw two identical faces, the people who lived with them knew the truth.

Maya and Muna were nothing alike.

Maya was gentle, thoughtful, and cautious, the kind of woman who apologized even when she wasn’t wrong. Muna was bold, fiery, and reckless, the kind of woman who believed the world owed her something and intended to collect it—by force if necessary. They were identical twins, born five minutes apart in a cramped hospital in Enugu, but from childhood, they lived like rivals trapped in the same body shape.

Growing up, Muna hated how easily people loved Maya. Teachers praised Maya’s discipline. Neighbors trusted Maya with their children. Boys admired Maya’s calm confidence. And Muna watched all of it with a smile that never quite reached her eyes.

“You enjoy being everybody’s favorite, don’t you?” Muna once said when they were sixteen.

Maya laughed nervously. “That’s not true.”

Muna leaned close, her voice low. “One day, I’ll take something you love. Just to see how you’ll cry.”

Maya had laughed it off then, thinking it was a joke.

She would later wish she hadn’t.

Years later, Maya was engaged to Chidi Nwankwo, a quiet, hardworking man who loved her deeply. Their relationship wasn’t loud or dramatic—it was steady, built on trust. Maya believed she had finally found peace.

Muna saw it as an opportunity.

One evening, Maya returned from work and found Muna sitting on her bed, scrolling through her phone with a strange smile.

“You look happy,” Maya said, dropping her bag.

Muna glanced up. “I should be. I saw Chidi today.”

Maya froze. “You… saw him where?”

“At his place,” Muna replied casually. “We talked.”

Maya’s heart skipped. “Why would you go to his place?”

Muna shrugged. “He invited me.”

“That doesn’t make sense.”

Muna stood up and stepped closer, their identical faces inches apart. “Are you scared, Maya?”

“Of what?”

“That I might be better than you at being you.”

Maya laughed uneasily, but fear crept into her chest.

That night, Maya called Chidi.

“Did you see Muna today?” she asked.

There was a pause. “You mean you?” Chidi replied.

Maya felt the blood drain from her face. “Chidi, I was at work all day.”

Silence swallowed the line.

“What are you saying?” he finally asked.

“I’m saying it wasn’t me.”

That was the beginning of the confusion. The beginning of the lies.

Muna started showing up where Maya should be—at Chidi’s apartment, at cafés, even once at Maya’s office. She wore Maya’s clothes, copied her mannerisms, and answered when people called Maya’s name. Whenever Maya confronted her, Muna denied everything with calm confidence.

“You’re imagining things,” Muna would say. “Maybe you’re stressed.”

Soon, Chidi began to doubt Maya.

“You’re always forgetting things lately,” he said one night. “One minute you’re sweet, the next you’re distant. Which one is the real you?”

Maya stared at him, tears filling her eyes. “I am the real me. My sister is playing games.”

Chidi sighed, tired. “You sound paranoid.”

Those words broke something inside her.

Things escalated quickly. Maya’s boss called her in and warned her about skipping work. Friends accused her of being two-faced. Chidi began spending more time with Muna, believing she was the calmer version of his fiancée.

And Muna enjoyed every second of it.

“You see?” Muna whispered one night as Maya cried. “It’s so easy to erase you.”

Maya begged her. “Why are you doing this? I’m your sister.”

Muna laughed bitterly. “You took everything from me without trying. I’m just taking it back.”

The final blow came when Chidi ended the engagement.

“I can’t marry someone I don’t understand anymore,” he said quietly. “I need space.”

Muna stood behind him that day, pretending to comfort Maya while hiding a smile.

Maya hit rock bottom. She lost her job. She lost her home. She slept on a friend’s couch and questioned her sanity. But pain has a way of sharpening the mind. And one night, while returning to pick up some of her things from the old apartment, Maya overheard a conversation that changed everything.

“I warned you,” a man’s voice said angrily from behind the door. “If this gets out, we’re both finished.”

“You already got your money,” Muna snapped. “Stick to the plan.”

“What about your sister?”

“She’s weak. Nobody will believe her.”

Maya’s hands shook as she recorded the conversation on her phone.

The truth was finally in her hands.

Maya didn’t waste time. She invited her parents, Chidi, close friends—everyone. Muna arrived confidently, dressed in Maya’s old clothes, holding Chidi’s hand.

“What’s all this drama?” Muna asked.

Maya stood up, calm but shaking inside. “Just the truth.”

She played the recording.

The room fell silent.

Muna’s face drained of color.

Chidi’s knees buckled. “Muna… you did this?”

Muna screamed. “She’s lying! She planned this!”

But the truth had already torn through the lies.

Their mother wept. Their father turned away in shame. Chidi dropped Maya’s ring on the floor and whispered, “I’m sorry.”

Muna lost everything that day. Her reputation. Her relationship. Her mask.

As she walked out, she turned to Maya with burning eyes. “You think you’ve won?”

Maya met her gaze. “No. I’ve survived.”

Months later, Maya stood in front of a mirror in a new city, in a new life. The face staring back was the same—but the woman was stronger.

Identical twins may share a face.

But character will always reveal the difference.

THE END
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